导读:本文为大家带来2017年9月30日雅思写作真题回忆及命中率分析的相关内容,此次考试是十一节前最后一次考试,也是9月的最后一场考试,于今天刚刚进行,所以小编迅速为大家整理话题内容及命中情况,供大家参考。小作文题型:流程图The diagram shows how soft cheese is made(10/05/2014)命中原题如下:制作软干酪范
本文为大家带来2017年9月30日雅思写作真题回忆及命中率分析的相关内容,此次考试是十一节前最后一次考试,也是9月的最后一场考试,于今天刚刚进行,所以小编迅速为大家整理话题内容及命中情况,供大家参考。
小作文
题型:流程图
The diagram shows how soft cheese is made(10/05/2014)
命中原题如下:
制作软干酪范文:
此次小作文为流程图,展现了soft cheese的制作过程。整体来说,是个比较简单的流程图,没有出现分叉走向不同方向的情况。
需要注意顺序连接词和动词的正确使用。
常用连接词推荐:
At the beginning of the process, next, subsequently, Next, …, after which …, …before v.ing, …, and …, Finally。
动词在该题中可分别用到mix, transport/send … to…, cool… at the temperate of …, add, employ/deloy, heat, come out of/release。
该篇建议用被动的语气表达,会更客观。展现3个步骤。
At the beginning of the process, water and milk will be mixed together. Then the mixture will be transported to a cooling storage container, being cooled at the temperate of 5 for 2 hours. After that, a small amount of salt is added before it takes 5 hours for fermentation to emerge finally.
7分+
This flow chart clearly divides the process of producing the soft cheese up into three main stages and shows how to utilize the water and milk for making this kind of food. Overall, it is evident that the mixing, heating and cooling are the main procedures and all have been utilized twice.
Initially, in the first stage, the water and milk are mixed first and then mixed and cooled at 5℃ for two hours.
Moving to the second stage, after adding the salt the liquid mixture would be processed into the thick mixture when it is fermented under 35℃ for two hours. Next, the fermented result is evaporated under heating at l00℃ for eight hours, the steam coming out.
Finally, the soft cheese could be filtered out by the top filter after cooling at 5℃ for eight hours. At the same time, the waste water is also filtered out from the filter.
大作文
题材:科技类
In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
相似考题:
2008-11-15
More and more people work at home and study at home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative development?
由于电脑科技的发展,越来越多的人在家工作和学习。你认为这是一个积极的发展还是一个消极的发展?
2011-03-19
Around the world, more adults can work at home and more children can study at home as computer technologies become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
在全世界范畴内,更多的成年人在家里事情,更多的儿童可以在家里进修,因为电脑技能变得更自制、更可及了。你认为这是一个积极的发展还是一个消极的发展?
2014-04-26
In most countries, with the widespread of the use of internet, people have more freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
在许多国家,随着互联网的扩张,人们有更多的选择在家工作或学习的自由而不是去上班或上学。这个现象的好处是否超过弊端?
6分:
在家工作学习的好处1:与每天固定地去上班或者上学相比,我们有更多可以自由支配的时间。
在家工作学习的好处2:利用高科技的设备在家开会比匆匆忙忙去某个地方开会更加地高效。
在家工作学习的好处3:在家办公或学习能够保护环境,防止空气污染,因为很少人会开车去工作,减少了交通工具的使用。
在家工作学习的坏处1:阻碍了同事和同龄人之间的交流和沟通。
在家工作学习的坏处2:人们经常对着电脑会感到孤独。
Nowadays, we witness the boom of technology. 这句稍微短了点At the same time, our ways of life are changing due to the development of technology. 你其实可以把第一句和第二句合并起来Many people can make choices between working or studying at home.
Clearly, distant-learning or working could bring many benefits to us. Firstly, we have more rights to allocate our time. It is more flexible to work or study at home than go to office or school routinely. Moreover, high-tech devices such as laptop which is equipped with a camera, make people work more efficiently as they could hold meetings or have appointments with clients at home instead of going to other places in a hurry. Besides, it is beneficial to protect environment from air pollution as there will be fewer people driving to work, thus reducing use of transportation.好的,这里基本顺利的
However, we could not ignore the drawbacks brought by the advancement of technology. Interaction among colleagues and peers are essential to our social relationship establishing. Without the face-to-face communication and discussion, people who always work with computers may feel lonely and isolated.
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