2017年12月17日托福写作考后评析

　　2016年最后一次托福考试也已经结束了，聚培训托福栏目为大家带来“2017年12月17日托福写作考后评析”，希望能帮到大家哦。

　　2016年最后一场考试，ETS 再次发了个福利，出了一个非常简单的旧题，可能想让大家过个好年吧：

　　独立写作

　　Should children spend most time playing and studying or they should be required to help the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning.

　　题型：两元素比较类

　　话题：教育类

　　思路：一边倒

　　重复：2009年9月12日 2013年12月28日

　　一边倒

　　支持学习和玩的话可以写学生学习压力很大，只有多花时间在学习上才能考到更好的成绩，同时也需要玩儿来缓解压力;另外，我们可以攻击做家务的坏处，如果学生被强迫做家务，就会让他们从学习中分心，无法提高学习效率。当然，如果支持家务的话可以写做家务可以提高非学术能力，毕竟我们可以说做家务也是需要合作的吗;同时做家务可以孩子们变得更加自律并且做事儿有条理;

　　分类讨论

　　喜欢分类的同学可以从地区贫富的角度入手，有钱的地方就主要以学习和玩儿为主，毕竟经济发达，竞争激烈，一定要保证学习和玩儿的时间才行;家务家长们都会找家政做了;然而条件差的地方的孩子就没这么好命了，还是得帮助父母分担一些啊。毕竟父母也很忙，孩子又不少，孩子们不帮忙做家务的话父母也忙不过来啊。

　　压力的段子 [记忆复写第6篇]

　　It is high time that government should arouse people’s awareness of the importance of physical soundness. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-health state. Given that it is governments‘ responsibilities to improve citizens’ health condition—governments should increase access to public exercise equipment in the neighborhood and raise people’s awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly through mass media.

　　自律的段子[记忆复写第1篇]

　　Second, a student who often cleans up his room is usually more self-disciplined and self-discipline is an important character shared by almost all successful people. So tiring and boring is the process of tidying the room regularly that it becomes a real challenge for many people. As a consequence, very few people can actually keep at it. But as long as one holds on to this habit day after day, he must have strong execution as well as persistence and diligence, which are all required qualities of a successful person. Steve Jobs, a man of great success, is highly self-disciplined. His idea of “simplicity” is reflected not only in his products but also in his own room.

　　分心的段子 [记忆复写第3篇]

　　Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. A good case in point is my own experience. When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.

　　独立部分无非就是没思路、写不顺、写不对三个问题，没思路的一定要考前多看看历年真题串讲，多看题才能确保找思路快啊;至于写不顺或者写不对的同学，那就考前多记段子，自己写不顺、写不对就少写呗，我用别人的总不至于出问题了吧。但提醒大家，用别人的东西一定要首先记准，其次别忘了扣题，千万不要得意忘形。

　　上述所有材料在写作机经班都有提供，大家如果考前时间比较紧，可以参加我们的9.9的机经班，点我报名。通过模板和段子冲刺一下。模板必须搞熟，除了看示范也要自己套几个题目看看。段子要首先搞清楚思路，然后争取记住，如果记不住就把重点句式记熟，其余的东西临场发挥。

　　综合写作

　　总体观点

　　阅读和听力讨论的是是否应该在路上建 solar panel，阅读反对，而听力支持

　　阅读部分

　　solar panels 不适合建立在 flat road 上，应该建在 tilt places 上面，因为平面的效率比较低，一般有角度效率才会高

　　玻璃易碎可能破坏轮胎从而导致交通事故;而且玻璃还特别滑

　　费钱造价高

　　听力部分

　　in overcast or cloudy weather solar panels can sunlight reflect in many directions, 在这种情况下，flat road 上面的太阳板更有效率

　　已经研究出载重大而且不容易分裂的玻璃;同时， new material has special tough texture as a result of which it can be used on wet and icy roads

　　在荷兰做的试验表明，一个 solar panel 半年的产能可以供一户人家使用一年，多出来的部分可以卖给其他国家来 offset cost

　　分析

　　综合部分大家除了练习听力之外，其实也可以多刷题，搞清楚阅读和听力的反驳关系，做多了之后猜的能力会大大加强，因为他们反驳的方式都出奇的相似，从而形成做题的感觉，大大的减少听力的压力。

　　阅读说不适合在平面，因为效率低，而听力反驳的时候是从以偏概全的角度入手的，通常效率可能确实低下，但是阴天的时候就很高

　　第二个点就是直接攻击证据本身，阅读说滑、易碎，人家听力就说不滑、不容易碎，这种直接攻击证据的反驳方法并不是特别多

　　类似的费用问题，大家一定要敏感，整个流程中某个环节花钱，并不一定代表其他地方就不能赚钱，所以也可以看成是以偏概全，就类似于氢能源燃烧的时候不产生二氧化碳，但是生产的时候会产生啊。