托福独立写作满分必备理由

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　　段子的翻译

　　首先，现在是政府应该提高人们对于身体健康重要性的意识的时候了。随着社会的加速发展，人们，特别是年轻人，面临着前所未有的激烈竞争。他们需要非常努力地工作来确保过上好的生活，这使得他们面对的压力比以前大得多。在这种情况下，他们中的大部分人的身体非常容易处于亚健康的状态。政府有责任改善公民的健康状况，因此应该在社区修建更多的体育设施，同时通过大众传媒来提高人们的对于定期运动的重要性的意识。

　　段子的英语

　　It is high time that government should arouse people’s awareness of the importance of physical soundness. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-health state. Given that it is governments‘ responsibilities to improve citizens’ health condition—governments should increase access to public exercise equipment in the neighborhood and raise people’s awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly through mass media.

　　如何记

　　梳理汉语思路

　　首先我们要搞清楚段子的主题句。并且结合段子的汉语梳理段子展开的关键点，最好能够写成简单的连线的形式。在找关键点的时候可以结合自己的情况。有的同学记忆力很好，可能一句话找一个点就成。有的同学可能需要每句话多找几个点才能记得更准。一般情况下，每一段里面有5-7个点应该就差不多。比如这个段子我们可以找出如下的关键点：

　　社会发展加速 -> 激烈竞争 -> 努力工作 -> 压力大 -> 亚健康 -> 政府责任 -> 公共锻炼设施和定期锻炼重要性的意识

　　对应英语思路

　　接下来，我们根据英文版的段子，找到对应的汉语的关键点的英语。

　　acceleration of social development -> fierce competition -> work very hard to guarantee a decent life -> causes them way heavier pressures than before -> be caught in a sub-health state -> public exercise equipment & awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly

　　如果我们能够做到闭上眼睛可以想的起来本段的汉语的关键点以及它们所对应的英语，就说明我们已经把这个段子的脉络掌握了。接下来我们就可以开始复写了。

　　逐句复写

　　从汉语版本的第1句话开始，首先对汉语进行合理的拆分，然后可以分别想想拆出来的每一个部分用英语该如何表达，然后再跟答案一一核对。如果每一个表达我们比答案想的都好，那就不用练习了。否则尽量能够将和答案不一样的地方记下来。分句练习的时候一定要注意：一句没记住不要开始下一句， 同时 先抓住本句的句式再去抓重点的短语最后再去纠结单词。拿本段的第一句话作为例子：

　　句式部分

　　it is high time that sb should do sth

　　短语部分

　　arouse sb’s awareness of the importance of sth

　　physical soundness

　　把上述句式和短语都搞定了，这句话自然就就记下来了。此时自信的同学在脑子里想想证据咋说，然后跟答案比对。否则可以将自己的翻译对着汉语敲一遍，最后跟参考翻译比较，看看还有没有错。如果有错搞清楚原因，重写本句。如果没有错，可以按照一样的流程开始下一句。对于基础不是特别好的同学，搞定了两句话之后可以把1-2句一起再敲一下。以此类推 1 1-2 1-3 1-4，这样能够保证在写后面的句子的时候前面的句子也会记得越来越熟。不至于出现1个小时过去了，还停留在整体看的阶段，根本不知道自己是否已经记住了。

　　按段复写

　　如果每一句都按照上面的标准搞定了，可以尝试对着汉语将本段的英语完整的敲一下，最好时间别太长，5分钟左右应该可以完成，最多10分钟。因为考试的时候一共30分钟。如果敲现成的一个主体段10分钟都打不完的话考试的时候可能就比较危险了。

　　整段写完之后跟答案进行比对，如果我们真的是按照分句练习一句一句练习过来的话，估计一次就可以达到匹配度95%以上。如果错误较多就要反思一下自己分句练习的时候是否做到了每句话都没错才开始的下一句。还是分句的时候就已经放水了。

　　错误反思和重点总结

　　最后一个环节就是整理，个人觉得整理的内容最好包括 思路汉语和英语+重点句式+重点短语和单词+错误原因分析

　　思路汉语和英语

　　社会发展加速 -> 激烈竞争 -> 努力工作 -> 压力大 -> 亚健康 -> 政府责任 -> 公共锻炼设施和定期锻炼重要性的意识

　　acceleration of social development -> fierce competition -> work very hard to guarantee a decent life -> causes them way heavier pressures than before -> be caught in a sub-health state -> public exercise equipment & awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly

　　重点句式

　　it is high time that sb should do sth

　　重点短语

　　arouse people’s awareness of the importance of

　　Along with the acceleration of social development

　　are confronted with

　　unprecedentedly fierce competition

　　are prone to

　　increase access to

　　raise people’s awareness of

　　错误原因

　　比如 it is high time that 后面没有加 should;再比如前所未有的这个词不会拼;还比如不知道 way heavier 是啥意思等等。大家千万要重视错误的总结，避免出现复写了一堆文章之后自己写东西还是错误连篇的情况出现。

　　如何用

　　千万别以为段子记住了就万事大吉了，这样可能会考得很惨。有的同学看到考题非常兴奋，因为正好某一个段子能套，就疯狂地敲啊，一边敲一遍窃喜，仿佛自己就是最幸运的人。结果忘了扣题了。比如有个题目是现在比过去更容易接受教育，有的同学写的是同意，理由就是现在人压力大所以每个人都尽力去学习。把压力的段子全都搬上去了。但问题是人家问的是现在是不是比过去更容易接受教育，而不是现在的人为什么更愿意学习啊。结果考了14分也是比较正常的。只要用了段子，而且写跑题了，人家立刻就能看的出来，分数自然不会高。下面我们结合2个题目来讲讲段子该如何套。

　　Agree or disagree, improving schools is the most important factor in successful development of country?

　　本题是一个多元素的题目，我们当然可以不同意，我们只需要找到2个因素说它们比改善教育更重要就行了。自然第一个就是人们的健康。这样一来这个段子几乎不用改就可以直接用过来。在开头最后一句话大家最好写清楚：there are at least two other aspects that carry more weight than improving schools. 这样一来整个一段话我们只需要再主题句上扣一下题就可以搞定了。

　　It is high time that government should arouse people’s awareness of the importance of physical soundness the importance of which far outweighs that of improving schools. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-health state. Given that it is governments‘ responsibilities to improve citizens’ health condition, governments should increase access to public exercise equipment in the neighborhood and raise people’s awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly through mass media.

　　Some people think we should follow our dreams, even if the dreams are ambitious. But other people think that we should focus on realistic goals. Which do you agree?

　　本题是一个两元素的题目，我们可以支持现实，第一个理由想到的就是压力。正因为压力大才要现实一点，先努力工作赚钱，提高生活质量，减少自己的生活压力。

　　It is high time that people should lay more stress on realistic goals and less on ambitious dreams in order to reduce pressure and improve their life quality. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-health state. To no one’s surprise, there is no better way for them to alleviate pressure and lead a better life than to give priority to realistic goals rather than ambitious dreams.