2016年12月15日雅思考试大作文7分范文赏析

　　今天聚培训雅思栏目的小编给大家带来"2016年12月15日雅思考试大作文7分范文赏析"，以下是详细内容，希望对同学们有所帮助!

　　Task：Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　思路解析：

　　本次考试的话题是关于国际合作及其产生的后果：国际合作更有利于环境保护还是世界贸易(跨国企业)?

　　关于 “international”问题，雅思大作文可谓频繁出现，主要涉及的话题包括国际旅游、国际慈善组织、国际新闻、国际合作等。比如，2011年5月7日“环境保护需要国际合作，个人什么也做不了”;2013年6月22日“孩子是否应该学习国际新闻的课程”;2015年5月13日和2015年8月13日“国际旅游是好是坏，让人开拓视野还是让人变得更加偏见”;2015年6月6日“援助应该针对本人，还是应该捐钱给国际慈善组织”等。

　　尤其值得关注的是，2010年6月17日与2014年1月25日两次考试的话题都是“世界贸易和国际旅游增加了人与人之间的交往，这是好事还是坏事”，而本次考试则稍微转换角度：国际合作对环境保护更有利还是对世界贸易更有利?

　　很多同学一看见国际，环保，世界贸易这样的词汇，可能头一下就懵圈了，不知从何动笔。在这里告诉大家一个秘诀：任何话题，无论大小，都一定与我们生活相关，烤鸭们要做的就是挖掘这些话题与我们日常生活的实际关联，以空对空，做玄学讨论，一般烤鸭做不了，咱也不屑去做，不就是一个雅思写作，至于那样大动干戈吗?咱烤鸭得赶紧搞定雅思，然后还有众多人生理想要去实现呐!

　　那么，国际合作给环境保护带来了什么好处呢?首先想到的是技术，你无我有，大家相互交流，不是可以更好地保护环境吗?这里如果烤鸭有些日常知识，能举出一些环境保护的技术输出或输入的具体例子就更好了!其次是改变环保意识。在国际合作中，我们可能从其他国家那里学习到一些以前没有过的环保观念。当然，有些环境问题本来就不是个别国家的问题，需要国际合作。

　　然后，国际合作又给世界贸易带来什么好处呢?首先，国际合作可为用户提供更多选择;其次，国际合作可以提高产品的本土化和服务质量。这些都将促进世界贸易的发展。

　　最后，论述“我的观点”。这个题目提问的重点是国际合作带给环境保护和世界贸易的好处，究竟孰多孰少?在老雅看来，这个问题实属无厘头：如果比较国际合作带给两个不太相关事物的好处多少?但烤鸭又必须要回答这个问题，因此需要提出一个自己的标准：就与我们日常生活的相关性看，国际合作好像对世界贸易的好处更大，因为它让我们直接感受到了它的影响，当然我也完全清楚国际合作对环保的影响同样巨大。

　　参考范文：

　　International cooperation is now everywhere: the clothes we wear, the food we eat, the car we drive - all may be the effects of international cooperation. Yet when it comes to issue of which of the two, the environmental protection or the world business, benefits more from international cooperation, opinions vary from one individual to another.

　　Needless to say, international cooperation has helped a great deal in environmental protection. When dealing with some environmental issues like global warming, we need the joint effort of all countries across the world. Even in face of local issues, the new technology from other countries can be very helpful. When developing the high-speed train in China, for example, a technology called “air cleaner” from Russia is used, which has helped to reduce significantly the air pollution along the railway.

　　International cooperation has greatly expanded the world business as well. International cooperation can not only increase the productivity but also bring down the costs. It is because of international cooperation that American customers can enjoy the high-quality commodities from China at low prices and vice versa. Meanwhile, if countries work together, they can make their products and services more agreeable to the local people, which in turn will create more markets. For example, Microsoft products are all originally in English and were met with cold eyes 20 years ago when they entered China. It was only after Microsoft cooperated with Chinese programmers and converted the language to Chinese that its products have been widely accepted in China.

　　It is hard, though, to determine which has benefited more from international cooperation. My immediate response would be that world business is the greater beneficiary. After all, I have seen with my own eyes how the expanded world business as a result of the international cooperation has changed my life. Of course, I am fully aware as well that our environment is becoming better and better thanks to the international cooperation.

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